Favorite Minor Character

Hey, how it is going? I didnt even see this question posted intil this morning, I apologize for the delay. Anyhow, my favorite minor character was the Vegetable Man. I really enjoy how he was kind of just thrown into the story, and like the random roles he played throughout it. I liked how he would sell Finch's vegetables to Reba with out Reba knowing. It seemed kind of odd to me why he was in the book, he was always just placed in at stange times, like towards the end with the storm. It's strange how he just decided to show up in the middle of a drastic storm like that.

Taking Stock

I think I told the story I wrote pretty well. I did exceptionally well collaborating with my ideas, applying them to the paper, but I should have spent more time proof reading, and composing sentences. My ideas were mainly generated after the assignment was given in class. I wrote them down in a list, and picked out the one I thought I would produce the most about, and write the best about. I did not use any graphics or photographs. Having someone proof read it for me gave me more incite into changing things I would not have thought about before. This proof reading also allowed the other person to pick up on small spelling errors. Next time, I tend to spend more time composing my sentences in different ways, and more time proof reading myself.